Come Back to me – Vaibhav Srinivasan, Tamilnadu
I didn’t believe that I live in this world;
Till I realized that you were my world!!!
Now I don’t have a planet to dwell… It hurts;
The initial woes of you leaving me… it irks!!
Consoling myself that you will come back, I live;
Educating myself that you are within me, I love!!
Worth of your presence is more felt in your absence;
I am just a lifeless creature, for you being my life!!
I have no tears in store to win your sympathy;
Nor I have the strength to prove that I am right always,
Neither the mind to analyze what went wrong between us’
I have nothing left in me, except you…My love!!!
Day in and day out, my mind says “I miss you”;
My heart contradicts; I am no more to miss you
Right Indeed I feel when my heart dominates;
Only a corpse suffering here… Bring back my life!!
My Bedroom is filled in with your sweet memoirs;
My pillow gets wet my eyes flood in with tears!!!
Oh my love, Giving lives to life to pillows and bedrooms…
Come back to me..My heart beats that only 72 times a minute
The next better thing that could make me happy unlike you…
Nothing but my “Good Bye” to this world without you!!
Till then I am kept alive… through the hope that…
You will be back one day!!!
Wish that’s not my D day!!!
Periyaalu da thambi nee..enjoy..gud one really..I hope someone is there running in your mind..
Great lines…
Very nice da.”I have no tears in store to win your sympathy” “Till then I am kept alive… through the hope that…You will be back one day!!!Wish that’s not my D day!!!” r mass da
its very good…
KALAKUNGO Roomie!
poems na i remember onlu our beloved mam………….jayalakshmi mam…………she is missed forever but never forgotten
awesome one da
beautiful!
good one:)))))))))))))
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congrats
superb feel dude.. the essence of song just brings intense feelings from one’s heart. hats off to these great lines written by my friend. congrats..:)
awesome dude…..great lines!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you all
fabulous!! keep goin on and on…
good job mate!! keep working on this.. also expecting a bit of positive energy in ur work.. too much of sadness for a start.. not a great idea regardless of the fact that it creates a lot of impact!
awesssum daaa… nice creativity !!!
try to write a tamil kavidhai nxt time for us !!!
really good
gr8 work
excellent lines…each line speaks out something 
keep going 
I have no tears in store to win your sympathy;
Nor I have the strength to prove that I am right always,
Neither the mind to analyze what went wrong between us’….. awesome lines….. great feel!!
awesome…!!! bt it wud be betta….if u say..fa whm it is…!!
