Come Back to me - Vaibhav Srinivasan, Tamilnadu

I didn’t believe that I live in this world;
Till I realized that you were my world!!!
Now I don’t have a planet to dwell… It hurts;
The initial woes of you leaving me… it irks!!
Consoling myself that you will come back, I live;
Educating myself that you are within me, I love!!
Worth of your presence is more felt in your absence;
I am just a lifeless creature, for you being my life!!
I have no tears in store to win your sympathy;
Nor I have the strength to prove that I am right always,
Neither the mind to analyze what went wrong between us’
I have nothing left in me, except you…My love!!!
Day in and day out, my mind says “I miss you”;
My heart contradicts; I am no more to miss you
Right Indeed I feel when my heart dominates;
Only a corpse suffering here… Bring back my life!!
My Bedroom is filled in with your sweet memoirs;
My pillow gets wet my eyes flood in with tears!!!
Oh my love, Giving lives to life to pillows and bedrooms…
Come back to me..My heart beats that only 72 times a minute
The next better thing that could make me happy unlike you…
Nothing but my “Good Bye” to this world without you!!
Till then I am kept alive… through the hope that…
You will be back one day!!!
Wish that’s not my D day!!!

19 COMMENTS

Parthasarathy August 3, 2011 At 1:26 am

Periyaalu da thambi nee..enjoy..gud one really..I hope someone is there running in your mind..
Kalaiarasi August 3, 2011 At 1:29 am

Great lines… 🙂
vinodh August 3, 2011 At 1:55 am

Very nice da.”I have no tears in store to win your sympathy” “Till then I am kept alive… through the hope that…You will be back one day!!!Wish that’s not my D day!!!” r mass da 🙂
raviteja August 3, 2011 At 4:16 am

its very good…
Venkatesan Raghavan August 3, 2011 At 4:25 am

KALAKUNGO Roomie!
gp August 3, 2011 At 5:16 am

poems na i remember onlu our beloved mam………….jayalakshmi mam…………she is missed forever but never forgotten
Aravind August 3, 2011 At 5:40 am

awesome one da 🙂
aparna August 3, 2011 At 5:50 am

beautiful!
dharini August 3, 2011 At 7:15 am

good one:)))))))))))))
congrats :)))
Ashwin Kumar August 3, 2011 At 11:07 am

superb feel dude.. the essence of song just brings intense feelings from one’s heart. hats off to these great lines written by my friend. congrats..:)
chaitanya August 3, 2011 At 11:15 am

awesome dude…..great lines!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vaibhav August 3, 2011 At 11:16 am

Thank you all 🙂
v,dhanya August 3, 2011 At 11:21 am

fabulous!! keep goin on and on…
Sriram Sridharan August 3, 2011 At 11:27 am

good job mate!! keep working on this.. also expecting a bit of positive energy in ur work.. too much of sadness for a start.. not a great idea regardless of the fact that it creates a lot of impact! 😛
VIky August 3, 2011 At 11:31 am

awesssum daaa… nice creativity !!! 🙂 try to write a tamil kavidhai nxt time for us !!!
supraja August 3, 2011 At 11:52 am

really good 🙂 🙂
sugi August 3, 2011 At 12:56 pm

gr8 work 🙂 excellent lines…each line speaks out something 🙂 keep going 🙂
preethi August 3, 2011 At 2:26 pm

I have no tears in store to win your sympathy;

Nor I have the strength to prove that I am right always,

Neither the mind to analyze what went wrong between us’….. awesome lines….. great feel!!
vachu August 3, 2011 At 3:50 pm

awesome…!!! bt it wud be betta….if u say..fa whm it is…!! 😛 😛